ace mcclouds character

name-ace mccloud

age-16

height-5 foot 4 inches

weight-145lbs

ninja ID-0501-789j-ac7e-4csd

village-village hidden in dragon valley

rank-acadamy student year1

element-wind and lightning

ninja type-balanced

description-ace mccloud is a master at taijutsu, ok at ninjutsu, and sucks at genjutsu

biography-ace mccloud is a ninja who works hard at everything he does and is always trying to master knew moves. nobody knows where he was born but he has proven himself worthy of joining the village hidden in dragon valley.

personality-happy most of the times but is easily angerd

Try to legnthen your biography, add family (since you are of the Dragonia Clan DJ, Anthony, and I are distance cousins), and add more description (like clothing). And if you your ninja type is balanced you wouldn't suck at genjutsu. You would also need to add weapons after you buy them and jutsu. You would need to talk to DJ about Ryo to buy such things.

genin are aloud only one element unless it is their sub element (clan)

youve got to edit a bunch of things sorry first off genin are only allowed 1 element so you have to either get rid of fire or lightning but you must also add dragon arts to your chakra elements because the dragon art techniques are givien to you cause your in the dragonia clan add family like mom,dad,cousins,bros,sis etc. also lengthen your biography if you wanna see an example of a good lengthed biography check out mine or Danzi's porfiles also add all the jutsu you already know to your profile in spoilers as well remember you already learned 2 dragon arts yesterday and also put in your squad as well your in squad 1 which is you,Danzi and Yuuki and your leader is Anthony make sure to add your squad as well and what clan you belong to (the dragonia clan) add everything i just posted and your profile should be good

name-ace mccloud

age-16

height-5 foot 4 inches

weight-145lbs

ninja ID-0501-789j-ac7e-4csd

village-village hidden in dragon valley

rank-acadamy student year1

element-wind and dragon art

ninja type-balanced

description-ace mccloud is a master at taijutsu, ok at ninjutsu, and is ok at genjutsu. he wears torn up jeens that was given to him by his father and doesnt wear a shirt that often umless on special occasions and is very powerful.

biography-ace mccloud is a ninja who works hard at everything he does and is always trying to master knew moves. nobody knows where he was born but he has proven himself worthy of joining the village hidden in dragon valley. during his youth he was always treated badly and beat up until one day a mysterious warrior came to the village and taught this kid the secrets of taijutsu. a week later the kids who were picking on him started to chase him and started to attack him ace defended himself then used strong taijutsu on them and knocked all of them out. but what happend was that ace got banned from the leaf village school and cast out of the village. ace womdered around practicing taijutsu until one day a swarm of ninja from the village hidden in sand found him and started to attack him. he tried to defend himself as best he could but he was no match against them until a mysterious stranger came to ace mcclouds aid and beat the intruders easily. ace mccloud was then tooken to the base of the village hidden in dragon valley and was just left there. ace then started to search around for his savior but could never find him/her. after the experinece he was accepted to the village hidden in the dragon valley but never went to the village hidden in dragon valleys ninja academy until the mysterious stranger who taught him taijutsu confinced him to join the acadamy and then he did. to this very day ace mccloud still hasnt figured out where he was born or who his parents were.

family-distant cousins- DJ, Anthony and The Riddick dad-unknown mom-unknown bros and sisters-unknown

jutsus-dragon art: chakra manipulation and dragon art: scale shuriken

squad-squad#1-members in squad-Danzi,Yuuki Hime, and me

squad leader-anthony

clan-dragonia

post if i missed anything

personality-happy most of the times but is easily angerd

approved profile status ~official~ could you put your jutsus in a spoiler please? just in case someone looks for your jutsus to see how much ya know and such

{ Also Edit : Your First Post }

And add the Approved Info

And also Add your jutsu in ( Like Dj Said )

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name-ace mccloud

age-16

height-5 foot 4 inches

weight-145lbs

ninja ID-0501-789j-ac7e-4csd

village-village hidden in dragon valley

rank-genein

element-wind,dragon art, and fire

ninja type-balanced

description-ace mccloud is a master at taijutsu, ok at ninjutsu, and is ok at genjutsu. he wears torn up jeens that was given to him by his father and doesnt wear a shirt that often umless on special occasions and is very powerful.

biography-ace mccloud is a ninja who works hard at everything he does and is always trying to master knew moves. nobody knows where he was born but he has proven himself worthy of joining the village hidden in dragon valley. during his youth he was always treated badly and beat up until one day a mysterious warrior came to the village and taught this kid the secrets of taijutsu. a week later the kids who were picking on him started to chase him and started to attack him ace defended himself then used strong taijutsu on them and knocked all of them out. but what happend was that ace got banned from the leaf village school and cast out of the village. ace womdered around practicing taijutsu until one day a swarm of ninja from the village hidden in sand found him and started to attack him. he tried to defend himself as best he could but he was no match against them until a mysterious stranger came to ace mcclouds aid and beat the intruders easily. ace mccloud was then tooken to the base of the village hidden in dragon valley and was just left there. ace then started to search around for his savior but could never find him/her. after the experinece he was accepted to the village hidden in the dragon valley but never went to the village hidden in dragon valleys ninja academy until the mysterious stranger who taught him taijutsu confinced him to join the acadamy and then he did. to this very day ace mccloud still hasnt figured out where he was born or who his parents were.

family-distant cousins- DJ, Anthony and The Riddick dad-unknown mom-unknown bros and sisters-unknown

ninjutsus

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squad-squad#1-members in squad-Danzi,Yuuki Hime, and me

squad leader-anthony

clan-dragonia

post if i missed anything

personality-happy most of the times but is easily angerd

weapons:

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taijutsu:

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summonings:

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genjutsus

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bijjin-silver

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you put dragon art: dragons in arms twice lol you have dragon art: dragonis in arms dragon art: scale shuriken and dragon art: chakra manipulation lol